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by ccino49

schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Phew, you put me to shame woman! Fans self, can I borrow Sev' for a while? Or how about just a house elf for a day or two ... my rugs need scrubbed again, lol. Thanks for sharing, Pitt
person Miepje
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your first bit of lemony was really very nice! More please!?

I loved Nina meeting the dragons (they're my favourite magical creatures) and that Harold passing out from shock. ^^ Good gods, Severus and baked beans (and the results) had me lmao.

But guys like Zabini *argh* too pushy. I liked how she turned into a python and warned him. But now he wants revenge... watch out Nina!

person Miepje
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn that Blaise! I really felt like strangling that mean rat.

Severus is angry again (and worried of course). I wonder what will happen with the full moon now Remus plans to lock himself away.

Loving the story and looking forward to more! ~Miepje
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, can I borrow Nina, I would like to have her redecorate my house for me. Now that is quite a handy talent. Severus better just get over himself. If he let her go ride dragons, and she handled it, I think she can handle 1 warewolf. Don' they relise that she will just do exactly what she wants to anyway. It's a little scarry about Azkaban, but I don't think those walls could hold her in. Somebody needs to smack Blaize in the head. The dragon part was pretty neat, but did you watch the movie Eragon? I was picturing that cute little blue baby dragon. Nina did that goul in, Peeves better watch out. Keep it up.
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Still here and still loving it!!!!
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhh, sing it with me everyone: Beans, beans, the magical fruit, the more you eat, the more you toot! That was gaseous, lol.

Loved the opal eyed dragon too.

Blaise, and the snake. Someone should teach Nina about a well-placed knee!

Pitt
person Apryl
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, what happened? No title for #32? It's amazing the way you've been telling this story. It's like I'm watching a movie inside my head. I can actually see it, all the details. Had to smirk at that exchange between Charlie and Severus. Poor Harold, if only he knew. Is this the last we'll be hearing of him? PARP PARPS?!?! Oh man, it's a good thing I was alone in the house while reading this. Someone would have sent me to the loony farm otherwise. She is really in for it this time! I would have thought Blaize had gotten the 'hint'. Oh well, I guess it's true...."fools rush in where angels fear to tread". Today was a long day and I really needed the belly laughs...all 10 mins. of them. So, I'll leave you with a bit of 'poetry'. "Beans, beans, the musical art, the more you eat, the more you'll fart. Beans, beans, the musical fruit, the more you eat, the more you'll toot." Thanks again, Apryl 8D
person Miepje
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad Severus and Nina had a good talk. She was so confused.

And, *phew* that last bit was very hot and delicious! I wonder what will happen next.

Loving the story a lot! ~Miepje
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, at least Snape finally quit being a bastard. But for how long? You go Argus Filtch. Who would have ever thought he could be nice. I loved that he could stand up to Snape. 9 days to the full moon, can't wait for that. I think it was a good thing that her and Harry talked. I think that gives her some insight into his life, and maybe will help her when she does in Scaley. Right now, I am waiting for Kali to bust down the door. More soon please.

Sansa
person Apryl
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So what did Scaly have planned for that muggle girl- besides the obvious? And why didn't Nina mention it to anyone? I could picture Malfoy's owl and I was cracking up over it. Nina is lucky to have a friend... in Argus of all people! Not many would dare to confront the Snape. I hope after Argus shows him what he has put her through he finally shapes up. A young lady with that much power deserves to be treated AT LEAST as an equal. Prophecy or not, he has a good chance of losing her. Perhaps even after it has been forfilled.