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for Slavery Sucks

by Joyce

person angel
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great.. i hope they can get sev and luna back ......... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person Kalima
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was much more interesting.
person Julianne
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter and story
update soon
person Cecilia
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. This is very intresting and I look forward to finding ou where it leads. Great job!
person Melissa
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this idea, and you're writing's alright. I'd like to see more of this story, please.
person Kalima
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not as interesting as the first chapter but it does seem necessary for the plot.
person Cherise
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story has so much potential and I love it so far. Please keep writing.
person Cherise
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm interested in reading more.
person Kalima
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You've piqued my interest.