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Draco=Bastard, it's true I looked it up in the dictionary and saw his picture!lol I can't believe he'd treat Harry like that! I mean you know that even though Harry enjoyed it then, he'll be kicking himself for it later, which is probablly what the little prick wants! Also there's Lucius Malfoy, as the expression goes, like father like son! Also Narcissa complaining to Draco just because Harry decided to defend himself and not take any crap from her! I've come to totally detest Malfoy family and would truly enjoy any harm that befalls them!lol Alright, Malfoy snippet of my review done! You poor dear, 3AM! Well I hope you get a good sleep after shopping and thank you for updating so promptly. This was another great chapter, you always seem to leave the chapter where it can lead right into the next, not always a cliffie....but something else, oh if I can find the proper word then I'll tell you but the good thing is that they all seem to be going somewhere in relation to the plot, so that's a good thing. Well as I've said before great chapter and I hope you have a very merry holiday and enjoy it. May you and your family stay safe during this time and after. ^_^

YAY! New CHapters!!!!! MAy the story go ON!!!!! Keep up the good work!! Think Harry needs more kick in him because yea Malfoys can be scarey but, Harry never backed down so easily!!

Omigawd. That was hot! AND WOW! You update so fast. I love you even more!

Can't think of any suggestions at the moment, but keep writing! The story is starting to come together. Maybe some longer chapters would be nice, too.

Personally, I'm a huge fan too. Though those who don't like it can be a little nasty when you propose the idea. I swear, I put up some challenges and because I used just the word mpreg or called for one of the male characters to be pregnant I had someone basically tell me that my challenges were crap just for the mention of the word. But oh well, I can't give a crap about them. I like what I like and it hurts no one so I'll continue liking it. And now that I've ranted, I'll actually comment on your story (I apologize, I tend to get a bit sidetracked sometimes).

I'm glad to see Harry standing up to Narcissa. I actually expected that considering her reaction when she saw Draco and I'm glad he didn't just let it go. Some people just think their kids are perfect. She didn't wonder why Harry hit him, it was a bit of an extreme thing to do without any kind of provocation. But I wonder even knowing now, or at least somewhat, will she care or will she still think Harry was wrong. The mindset during the time you seem to be describing often sees to wife as being basically something for the husband to do with as he pleases and as Harry seems to be the 'wife' she might not see anything wrong with him abusing Harry as he sees fit. Hmmm....

Now I'm wondering who the cold, angry gray eyes belong to. We can jump to the obvious conclusion that it would be Draco but it would be interesting for it to be a surprise and be someone else. Though as far as I know only Lucius has gray eyes, I don't really know about Narcissa. Anyways, I can't wait for your update and if you do decide to make it an mpreg story I will be behind you 150%.

pretty good!

Yeah it did help on Harry's feelings on the situation. You can always put in little flash backs and not humungous ones that some people do. I think that the length of this one was fine. More please though! Don't forget about us wonderfull readers/reviewers.

grr.
your chapters are deplorably short. please write bigger chapters. :D If you have to forego the reader responses, so be it :D
I think its more important to write more and write well :D your story line is great
big mpreg fan here!

Well first things first, since there wasn't any need to bash Draco in this chapter (from the ending maybe the next one though!lol) I want to tell you that you shouldn't apologive for the short chapter, also for it being late-both of these things are completely ridiculous! I know you may feel bad b/c they are short but from the number of positive reviews you're getting, I think people don't really care that they're short b/c they're so wonderful! Not to mention the fact that you've been updating this like a fiend!lol This can't be considered late b/c you didn't get a chapter in the very next day, calm down, this is the holidays and you're supposed to enjoy them! Not spend time worrying if people will be angry b/c you don't spend every waking moment on this story! So please, calm down, relaxe and enjoy writing this b/c let me tell you that I would rather you be happy with what you post then updating with a bunch of new chapters and then end up stuck as to what to do next with it, I promise you that even if it takes weeks to come up with something new I'll still remain a loyal fan and I'm sure others will too! ^_^ I don't mean for this to be hurtful or criticizing, I just want to let you know that at the end of the day you are the author, which means you get to call the shots! lol Okay, now to praising you for another chapter well done! Again I can't praise you enough for having a strong Harry yet still keeping in play with the fact that he does have a hero complex, sacrificing his well being for others (his parents). Oh boy, you can't imagine how happy I was when he cut off Narcissa!!!lmao! Poor thing has been through the mill, the last thing he needs is someone else complaining and threatening him! I did like that you made him give reasons as to why he hit Draco, this way Narcissa can't go blabbing about it to everyone else b/c he might just tell people what happened to him in return! I can't stop saying how much I love the Harry you have in this story! Though from the look he got being under that table *shudder*, someone's about to get their butt kicked!lol Thank you again for updating this and I can't wait for the next chapter to find out what happens to poor Harry. It just seems like the poor thing goes through one challenge to the next doesn't he?lol

Another short chap but it was VERY fast! Well, I guess I read the chapter late or something. I bet like Blaise or someone is going to come by the castle and try to woo Harry and Draco will get all jealous. Ha. That would be funny. Not sure if that's been done before. Anyways, wow! 40 something reviews in two days. You're lucky. It just goes to show how great this story is so far.