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for The Lion in Winter

by xXBrokenDreamsXx

person Leentjef
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very very good story
keep going and post soon
bye bye
person Anna
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was sweet...and hot! Update soon!
person Draco'sBoy
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
o0 that was fantastic. loved every word of it. your dracos is so sexy.
person stasa
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so beautiful!!!
I love this chapter :D Update again soon
person NightLo
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This Harry is so...manful, so demanding and so delicious...afterall, he is the son of the greatest warrior, and I would love to see something more like this sooner!
person Moyima
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww. They're coming around. Nice chapter.
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... so much anger...
But I hope it'll eventually turn out okay...
Poor Harry... Draco won't rape him again, will he?...
person Outlaw Angel
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sheesh...please continue with the story...I really need to know what will happen nect...
like really fast...will Draco keep on forcing Harry for sex?..or what...this is
soooo confusing...please update sooon....
person zzz
schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like it a lot so far. i'm only on the first chapter though. i'm not sure if you got a beta along the way but if you havent, i suggest you get one now. there are a few annoying mistakes. they're grade-school mistakes, which is why they're so annoying. misplaced commas, your and you're, to and too. i dont know why but that just bothers me. the plot is really interesting though and it's decently written. its also hard to come by a good submissive harry fic. (which i hope this one will continuously be?) thanks for the fic and update soon.
person dar
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOOHOOO!!!! I WANNA READ WHAT WILL HAPPEN!!!! i want to read the next chapter!!! please update soon!!!