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for The Lion in Winter

by xXBrokenDreamsXx

person Anon...
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heyy... by any chance have you ever written this somewhere else? Because I swear I read something that starts off like this somewhere else... I just can't remember where and the title was different I think, because I think I would have remembered if it "the lion in winter" *grins* Its great either way.
person Argo
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm totally, absolutely, fully hate Draco right now! This bastard must be in a lot pain!!! Grrr! Please, oh, please, make it so Harry had a chance for paying him back, so this rapist was very, very sorry!
Err... You haven't explained about potion Harry had to drink. What it was for? God, I hope it wasn't for Harry to become pregnant, it would be so unfair for him. :(
Anyway, I feel so angry and helpless right now, I want to sob.
I hope you will explain why Harry had to marry to Draco. How on the earth his parents can do this to him?
I also wonder why Harry is so weak and helpless against Draco, and why he is smaller and less strong than him. I mean, he is a knight's son - he must be training from childhood, so he must be very strong and skilled as warrior. On contrary, Draco is a king's son, so he must be pampered from childhood, and therefore not so strong physically. So, why it is Harry is such a weaker there?