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I like stories with Harry as Sub and Draco as Dom. Story sounds very interesting and promising. Please keep it up and update daily. Good Job!

So far, I like your beginning. Are we get to get more background though? Like how this marriage came about and exactly who Draco and Harry are in this universe? Also what was that that Harry drank? So many questions, I hope your planning to update soon so hopefully some of them can be answered.

Looks promising! I like - wait, scratch that - I LOVE Dom!Draco, so you can bet that I'll be back to read this! Great job so far. I hope you can make an exception to these stories; most of the ones I've read so far are quite similar, so I'm hoping yours will be different. Good Luck!

Slashy Snitch

write a lot!!! it will keep reviewers happy...at least me ;)

AAAAA!!!! Stupid thing erased my review and I don't remember what I wrote. I know I asked about the contraceptive. Does Draco using it mean that Harry can/will get pregnant? If so, cool:D I'm glad to see Hermione, I've developed a real appreciation for her character.

Also I just wanted to add that I agree with you completely. Dom!Harry and Sub!Draco just doesn't seem right at all. Harry just doesn't strike me as a dominant kind of guy, his character just feels too passive (minus the angry outbursts of OOTP). And Draco just seems too... Draco to put up with being a bottom.

great

Yes I did like this chapter and I can't tell you how glad I am that you made Harry stand up for himself, though I wonder how well that will turn out *winces*. It's nice that you've made him a little more open in your story about his problems, I usually read fics where he does nothing but try to hide his pain (usually the only fics with a touch of reality) and had him confide in Hermione. I have one question though, why did Harry tremble when Hermione said it was a contraceptive? Is he worried that he'll be raped by Draco again? Anyway thank you for updating, your still doing a wonderful job and I can't wait for the next chapter.

OMG!! if u update like this I'll be at ur feet in no time, loved the chapter but I do need more!!!

oh please please continue i cant wait for an update.

Reading fics is so not what I should be doing right now but I saw the summary and couldn't help but read. After I got through the chapter I was happy enough with most things except for one major thing, why is Draco, the prince of a nation marrying a man? And if that's what the potion is for wouldn't it still be simpler to marry a girl...anyways that's just me being critical [and yes I do realize there would be no plot unless Draco married Harry]. If I were to be more critical than that I would say that the characters seemed very forced for the moment though I know that will resolve itself as the story progresses. Overall I think you did a very good job with starting this off, I can't wait to see how things shall pan out.

- Incessant_Darkness