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Poor Harry! Draco was horrible! What was that potion? Can't wait for chapter 2!

Rationality was never one of my strong suits either, but that's fine cause this idea is wonderful and I don't really care for all the little things in the grand scheme of things as long as a fic is well written (which this is).

I like tha pace at which this is progressing and more than that I like the speed at which you update so keep up the great work and keep the chapters coming.

- Incessant_Darkness

Oh! Do continue! I luv powerful but submissive Harry...
To tell the truth it's my drug

the first good chapter of many i hope.

hm... well, first things, the thing that attracted me to the fic was the title. Have you ever read the play, "A Lion in Winter"? It's about king Richard (I think) and his 3 sons who all are vying for the throne. Throw in his wife and mistress and you got yourself a book ;) oh, and the oldest son is gay (it's kinda funny and totally unexpected actually, but based on fact). Anywho, that's what the title reminded me of. So I was wondering if it was going to be like that. Upon reading it, though, I see it's not.

It was a little disconcerting when Draco raped Harry, but I'm glad Harry's standing up to him because don't I hate submissive characters, lol (well, in sex it's okay, because someone has to be, and I do prefer Harry, but yeah... sorry, I'm really picky. I can't help it). I've read a few other fics kinda like this with the prince and Harry, etc. Though, I've never finished any (mostly 'cause they never get done, but I do also bore very easily. I really don't know what's wrong with me...) ANYWAY, your fic is interesting, and I like fics that don't go the general direction. They tend to get boring after a while. One thing, though, that's bothering me. In a lot of your dialogue, you use improper punctuation (or actually, you use none). you say: "blah blah blah" Said so and so. It really should be: "Blah blah blah,(comma)" s(lowercase)aid so and so. I hope this is helpful. If not, try a beta who can explain it better and help to correct it :) Better fics through beta's :D Plus, proper grammer makes it a lot easier to read and will attract more people to the fic :) good luck!

Very intriguing indeed! But could you give us more background material for this fic? I cannot seem to place the story on its supposed time frame or setting.

Other than that, that was a really nice start. Hope you'd update soon. And I'm kind of excited to read more confrontational scenes between Harry and Draco.

wow very dramatic beginnig, I like it!


you've caught my attention


shadow

I think it's going to be agood story and I agree with your pov of this kind of stories, can't wait for the next chapter^^ but I do hope it is a happy ending story

Well, now. After the first chapter I wasn't sure I was going to read the second because I don't know. Something about Draco raping Hary just... I don't know. Although, if you think about it, it's kinda realistic. :D But anyways I read the 2nd chapter just cause I was curious and I was SO HAPPY for Harry! He fought back! Yay! Butttt he wasn't successfull. Oh well. Anyways, you got yourself a new fan for sure!

If you say it will be better I'll believe you, but you better up date soon before we start a hunting party to get Draco and turn him into a rug.