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for The Lion in Winter

by xXBrokenDreamsXx

person Moyima
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW- This is fantastic! I love a dom. Draco! VERY NICE work. Please give us more soon!
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why is Draco angry now? Can't wait for chapter 5! What does Narcissa think about what she just learned?
person mphoenix
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
okay a cliffie i get.. but geez.. update soon!
person doesitmatter
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
amazing story
and i cant wait to
see what happens with Draco and Harry
hope to see a new chapter soon!
person dar
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! I like where this story is going!!! I like harry with some kick in him!!! Makes Draco's job harder!!!
person Tryst
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Leave it to Narcissa to get in the way. Oh man. When the chapter ended I just DESPERATELY wanted some more. I mean... it's just addicting. Pleaseee update soon!
person cirquegirl999
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That Bastard!!!!!! He went and tattled to his mummy and now Harry is going to get the thrashing of his life with that wicked woman's tongue! I mean I can't possibly see Narcissa letting this go without making him pay for it at least a little, unless she recognizes the fact that hopefully Harry will rid Draco of his inflated head. I wonder what Draco has up his sleeve though? (rhetorical, I love the anticipation of not knowing what will happen next) I've also come to the conclusion that when I review (I plan on making that every chapter! ^_^) I'll rant about Draco first to calm down, which then means I can turn the review into something nice in the end. I know werid but for some reason I like leaving remarks on a positive note. As for the shortness of the chapter......I'd prefer it to be short and updated regularly (if not I'm one of those people who understand that you wonderful authors do have lives outside of AFF, I'll just be more elated when you review) some authors I know update every decade and the chapters are still short, so believe me when I say no one has a right to flame you over it. Thank you as well for clearing up the contraceptive thing, I actually like the difference where the reason he needed it was not because males could get pregnant in his world but it comes from Draco's side, the idea is original. Alright I think I'm done!lol Anyway I loved this chapter and look forward to the next, thank you for the update and continue with the brilliant work!
person Jih Pun
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story so far! Any by the way, I'm a huge Mpreg fan too! So, keep up the good work and keep the chapters coming!
person kumori
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i kind of just stumbled on to this story. but so far i really like it. draco was a right bastared that first night, and i hope that harry tells his mother why he hit draco. well i look forwared to your next chapter. good luck

kumori
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Will Narcissa found out the truth of what her precious Dragon did to Harry! I hope so! Need chapter 4!