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by lpicw

person Anon
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person mia
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow,love the story,but its quite creepy..i'd love it if u write another story like this..malfoy and his
friends found a mysterious girls and do sumthin they shouldnt do,but dont kill her.. no revenge or anythin scarry.. why not make a dark fic that will end wit happy ending,maby malfoy decided to be with the girl after that.
person Anon
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Didn
person TiffanyK
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really liked the setup but the ending really sucked. If you don't want to continue a story just stop don't kill it like that.
person Priscilla
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow I will be blunt I didn't like the ending much I think it ended to soon but the story plot was good I wish there was a sequel It would be nice and you went quickly also. But a good story.
person Anon
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...This reminds me of a very Harry Potter version of "V for Vendetta"
person Emmylovedraco
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is geting good, I love it Please more update's soon.
person BuffyXO
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, wow, so this is why she wants revenge. I cannot say that I blame her and I am sure that Draco's torture will be more than just of the physical nature. Again, wow.
person ocard
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whoa. that was... interesting. nice story, nicely written, but did draco really have to rape the poor girl? with four other people? oh well, i'll keep reading the story, since i have no idea where you want to take it. if you want it to be a dark fic, then you should have Gilly kill Hermione in front of Draco... or maybe the other way around... it doesn't matter, you're a fabulous writer and i am sure this story will turn out just as good =)
person meg
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved please update soon

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