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December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well this is a pairing I never thought about.
Now about the story so far. The way he explained all he was about to do to her so calmly, without her putting up the slightest resistance seemed a little strange. I wasn't sure if she was drugged via the sherry or not. Her reactions seemed to change back and forth throughout.
Okay he's only 10 or so years older than her, but his dialogue came out as a dirty old man! (IMO.:-) )
As for Snape. Well I can understand him rescuing Hermione, but to just let the creep go, no matter what the circumstances, was a bit weird. He could have AK'd him, but then your story would have been over before it started.
Does that mean BC Jr is going to come back and have her again?
Now about the story so far. The way he explained all he was about to do to her so calmly, without her putting up the slightest resistance seemed a little strange. I wasn't sure if she was drugged via the sherry or not. Her reactions seemed to change back and forth throughout.
Okay he's only 10 or so years older than her, but his dialogue came out as a dirty old man! (IMO.:-) )
As for Snape. Well I can understand him rescuing Hermione, but to just let the creep go, no matter what the circumstances, was a bit weird. He could have AK'd him, but then your story would have been over before it started.
Does that mean BC Jr is going to come back and have her again?
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December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
@1 I hope you plan to continue this story!!! Its really good.
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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was great. very well written. keep up the good work.
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December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Another masterpeace :-) I already love your story. I really prefer to read about Hermione and those dark and dangerouse men of Slytherin. These pairings are so fascinating....
Can not wait to read more. Snape seems...human. Hermione won't tell Ron and Harry..or will she?
Will be waiting for an update! exellent work!
Can not wait to read more. Snape seems...human. Hermione won't tell Ron and Harry..or will she?
Will be waiting for an update! exellent work!
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December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bella, Bella, Bella. Where do you get these ideas?? I had an idea that you would be writing a story with these chracters when I noticed the category yesterday. As always, it was wonderful. You know, except for the actual subject matter, but I'm sure you know what I mean. So I guess I'll be here, waiting for an update on this story as well, lol.
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December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just as I have thought! ( maybe I have a gift of Divination...mmm...no, definetly not:-) The first writer in this category-Bella! Where do you get those ideas, I don't know. But they really pay off:-) Interesting start and can't wait for more to read!
few pics of David for you:-) When I was living in London this summer, I've watched 'Dr.Who' ':-)
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/6/60/Barty_crouch_jr.jpg/200px-Barty_crouch_jr.jpg
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/ms/thumb/3/31/Crouch_jr2.jpg/250px-Crouch_jr2.jpg
few pics of David for you:-) When I was living in London this summer, I've watched 'Dr.Who' ':-)
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/6/60/Barty_crouch_jr.jpg/200px-Barty_crouch_jr.jpg
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/ms/thumb/3/31/Crouch_jr2.jpg/250px-Crouch_jr2.jpg
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December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you made it turn out good,it made,me fell like I was there.I have'nt had a chance to read much fan fics lately,but I really I like this one and hope you can update soon!
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December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh Bella bravo!!! I can't agree more how yummy David Tennant was as Barty Jr. I still see tongue flicks during Doctor Who some times! LOL.....I know you won't leave this hanging so off you go...tut tut....there's chocolate on the way. Skye