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for Darkness Consumes

by Rumpelyssa

person Expelliarmus
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh.... poor Hermione, that's horrible, i hope Harry Ginny and Snape rescue her soon.

This is a really cool story, and the couplings in it are fantastic to read about, although i would have liked it a lot more if it had a H/Hr element to it. But i love how you've made Snape care about Hermione yet still keep that dark edge about him, good job.

I hope Barty does share his new 'Toy' with The Dark Lord. Even though he doesn't like to share i can see You Know Who, taking her to 'play' with. I
person xenija
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh...It's not what I've wanted to say..couldn't think how it would sound in English for a moment. Please, forgive me ....
The thing is...he was always a teacher for them and showed no more concern about that head of Slytherin should of Gryffindors. With Hermione's situatuin, he finally crossed that line. he feels more responcible for her, because he could do something to prevent this rape. He showing his 'true' self even if just to her in the start. Later to boys of coarse...His 'Bat of Dungeons' image is now shaterred and we see him more than he wants us...
Really wonderful story I might add.I just love it. How you describe them, everything. please, do update as soon as you can...will be waitin patiently.

Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
person cateye
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Iwould go to Severus's house and have tea with him any time! Poor Hermione,her future is kind of looking grim,I hopeBraty starts being nicer to Hermione.You can put Severus and Lucius in the story as much as your heart deasires as far as i'm conconered.
person GryffJr
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Creepy indeed:-) Anyway, I'm glad you've continued so fast .Plot is going very well....Barty is back from the dead and is given a gift he is not intented to share....I wonder if Snape will try to save her.he fells a little responcible for her affter all. Very-very-very-wonderful story.I love it already!:-)

p.s. I've sent both pics and links to your mail:-)
person Dylan
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Re my first review. I was refering to Hermione's lack of fight, when she had downed the sherry and Barty took her to the bed and laid her down. That's why I thought she had been drugged. Sorry for making myself clearer.

Pt 2. Well, he's back. I wonder how long it will be before a rescue. Snape will blow a gasket when he finds out what has happened!
person Lady Lynn
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn that Dumbledore sucks. Poor Hermione. I hope she never gives in.
person Dee Dee
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, and look forward to reading more, you always surplice me with the unique parings. I don
person angel
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man .. now dark lord want to play with her to .. poor mione .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person SmileZ
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoa. Bella. Did I ever tell you that I worship the cyberground you type on? Oh well, I'm just going to remind you of it. Lol. You wrote me a letter about the whys of your religion and how it effected your life, and my respect extends to how well you've tolerated that kind of hostility from simple minded people. It's great that you follow what you want to write and not be pressured into certain kinky things. So I guess I can't expect a threesome in any of your stories eh? (sigh) lol It's cool though, I personally think making love should only be shared between two people and not have a tagalong. Haha BUT threesomes with the intent of nothing but pleasure is just hard to resist. lol.

ANYWAYS... I saw this pairing in the Harry Potter archive, and I was like "OH MY GOD THAT GUY WAS SO HOT IN THE MOVIE!" I all remember that sexy tongue thing. LOL. very snakelike. And how delighted I was to find out that you wrote this story. So I get to read your wonderful writing with a very, very RARE pairing. You really rock! Well enough of my asskissing, (I blame it on reading too many Draco fics) Just wanted to say great first chapter! I'm sensing some SSHG moments in this story too huh? Well, looking forward to your next update! <3 SmileZ
person angel
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel