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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story has many mistakes, (though it's not nearly as bad as most of the crap posted at ff.net) some of which make it difficult to read. Please get a get a beta reader for both spelling and syntax. Then clear out the typos. If you *do* have a beta reader, fire them and get another.
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As much as I'd like to take credit and say I'm just so good that I can predict stuff before they happen... that wasn't the case. I was being totally sarcastic about Draco... eheheh... Please don't stop writing!! *cries* I love this, though whole one sided love thing that eventually gets returned later. I think it would've been funnier if Ron was the one that came to beat Draco up. *grins* Update soon!!
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well, i'd like to see updates and i'd like to recieve updates in mail if you've updated..=^.^=
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW...lol, that was amazing!! that sucks poor harry!!!
Lol, now draco has to form a relationship with Harry just so he doesnt try and kill himself. but harry isnt an idiot hell catch on. I cant wait for the next chp! TOTALLY wanna see harrys side of all of this!
Lol, now draco has to form a relationship with Harry just so he doesnt try and kill himself. but harry isnt an idiot hell catch on. I cant wait for the next chp! TOTALLY wanna see harrys side of all of this!
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bravo, bravo. It has been a while since I have had the oportunity to read a decent HD fanfic. I was extremely delighted to have stumbled upon this one. From the looks of it, Draco will be the dominate one in the relationship (as it should be). I sincerely hope that you find the time to update as soon as possible.
If you can, please send me an e-mail when you update at: justice02908@yahoo.com
Wishing you the best,
~~~rAiNwAtEr~~~ (Too lazy to log-in.)
If you can, please send me an e-mail when you update at: justice02908@yahoo.com
Wishing you the best,
~~~rAiNwAtEr~~~ (Too lazy to log-in.)
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHaah
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
need more need more
poor harry:(
poor harry:(
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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Continue! Continue! Continue! XDDDD
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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
way to go hermonie....please do something save the poor boy. my heart is breaking.
please update soon.
please update soon.
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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Yessss, chapter 5!!! WOOOOOO! Hope to see Chapter 6 soon!
Slashy Snitch
Slashy Snitch