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This format is really really hard to read, especially for people with bad eyes and dyslexia like me

I just had to write review for this story, it was that amazing! After reading this one, i went ahead and read many of your other stories and they were just as entertaining. Thank you for writing 'em :)

This story seems like it's good, but the formatting is really obnoxious. There are html breaks in all of the paragraphs where the coding went awry and it makes it difficult to want to continue reading.

Though the story itself is witty and fun, I am having a hard time going on when the paragraphs are so cut up with coding errors that they're nearly impossible to decipher.

You really should go back and fix it.

ok, i just read the whole story. i got kind of frustrated with it and had to keep coming back to it. it was good, but it just didn't have the right kind of flow for me. i don't know why. well, maybe i do. I really don't like to think of harry as a submissive in bed. the reason for that is because i see him as a submissive in his everyday life. that and you kind of made him seem like a whinny little baby. other than that i have no real complaint. i liked the story. if i didn't, i never would have finished it, and i would not leave a comment even if it is a backward compliment.
Kat

youe certainly gotten me going. what an awesome fic. I must say that I try to avoid creature!fics and Orginal content fics but your creature was not only believable, but even enjoyable to me. I'm very impressed. I look forward to reading your other work.
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M-T

OH MY GOD!! I LOVE this story!!
GOD, I just can't stop myself reading it!!(even printed it out and brought the book all the time with me.xD)
I..I..URH!!I'm sooooo sorry but I can'r find proper words in English to let you know how I love this..!!(damn!)
I wonder if it has already been translated into another language, if not, would you mind to have a Chinese Version?
There are also lots of HP fans in Taiwan but not all of them can read in English...and I really want to share this great work with them.
would it be ok if I translate /where's my Dragon/ into Chinese and put the translation on several Chinese sites?
no money would be made from it and it will be stated that it is a translation, followed by who the author is and a link to the original story. And I will send you the link of the translation when I post it.

I would be thrilled if you allowed me to translate it!!

please email me if I got your permission.(ning_1013@hotmail.com)
I'm desperate for the answer.


sincerely yours
Ning

what i didn't get is the fact that no one bothered to inform some adult.Why is draco blamed when ron and hermione are not?And isn't pomfrey informed too since she healed harry?This really lacks details and it takes all the little of credibiliy this fic have.It's not logic nor coherent.I don't see why even the headmaster and the professors were not informed of harry's state and strange behaviour the moment his friend realised there was something wrong?Ten days later and one professor is now informed?Unrealistic really.Like they kept that for themselves and all...How STUPID.YOU make them act stupid actually since everything writen come from you.As an author you are the one to give certain attributes to your characters and here they are just plain stupid.You dismissed pomfrey,what just like that?she is not even mentioned or anything.TSSS!

oh! and one more thing : when in the dialogue one of them say "eurm"...WTF? more stupid than i thought...I'll end my reading here because this fic is just writen in an immature fashion and is just infuriating to the core.I read your little author's not on this chapter(i didn't read the chapter u__u) and you are mentioning some details "you forgot"...Gosh, these are some essential information you put IN your chapters, not in your A/N!! that's it i'm leaving...I wonder what this fic is doing on "adultfanfiction" because it sure is not very "adult" but written by some 13 years old teen.I don't even want to know about the sex scenes...*shudders*.Grow up!
yes,i'm flaming

I have read this several times, and I LOVE it!

Wow! What a brilliant fic but way, way too short. I can't wait for addtional stories from you.