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by theblackrose

person stray523
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Smut is always better when it can make you laugh! I really liked your story. Now I'll have to look for more of your writing. ;D
person Iarejedi
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL! That was awesome. Wow quite some visuals going on in that ficlet. Great job. :D
person Mr Whippy
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I did ya mum
person Alchemist
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fun, very well done. Rather well IC as well. I like.
person ooky the spooky
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was brilliant! I loved it!
It made me laugh! Good job... You caught the character's personalities perfectly!

I could see it happen... *dies* <3
person Mistress Vamp
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HOT!!! ::MV::
person Kay_Lupin
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please Do add another Chapter, lets see Remus help Sev out Grins
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
[Stares at screen with glazed eyes and drooling]
Guh.....
person mimy
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved it. More chapters Please!!!!
person Heksy
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness...
You had me laughing with this one.
It is so recognizable.
Especially that sentence "unrecognizable scribble", that made me laugh out loud.
I really am looking forward to another chapter.