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for A Very Horrible Idea?

by MissSnape

person Anon
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this so far. :) Can't wait to read more.
person Anon
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok,the last chapter was alright nothing to get to excited about though. I did like that fact that her earings were little couldrens though. In a way it shows she likes potions.

schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! :)
person cateye
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story,I look every day to see if it has been updated.i wonder if Severus would protect her form anyone?
person Amy
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I cant wait for Snape's obsession to progress! Keep it comming!
person CB13
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MrsSnape, This is hilarious. I especially loved the bit where Ron corrects Hermione's incorrect address of Professor Snape. That was positively priceless. And being inside of Severus' head, enjoying access to his irritation at her inattention, is quite rewarding. Cheers and keep up the good work.
person wsanders
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Seriously hilarious. How dare she not notice him indeed! I love love it. I hope she unknowingly torture him some more or play hard to get, and maybe even throw Albus in the mix- I realize this is overdone, but I would like to see your version of it.
person Ava Allen
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was very cruel, you know??? To write so short chapter..... ;-P
person anodominic
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
In chapter one, the substitute should be Grubbly-Plank, not Grubby-Plank. Sorry if I'm being too nit-picky.
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! :)