rate_review Reviews

that was great if i was harry i would have done the same thing.

MORE this story is awesome! I've been searching for awhile for a Harry Rebels story and now you've startedi'm hooked!!
One question is Harry becoming a muggle or what???? suppose it will be answered in the next installment!

I love how Harry told the to fuck off, so I f there is a squel I would love to read it to >.<

I really enjoyed the story. I hope you will continue.

> The train ride seventh year was filled with surprises, for one, Harry finally admitted to his best
> friends that he was gay.

ROFL. WHAT A PIECE OF SHIT. Harry is NOT gay. Ron is the only gay in Hogwarts! This is typical slash shit! Please delete this horrid piece of dragon dung.

As a one-shot its deradful, but as the beginning to a story its wonderful. i jope that you continue on with it because you put out some interesting ideas and i want to see what would actually happen with him washing his hands of them all and what they would try to do to voldie.

This is a good story, but like another reviewer said, it would work better as the first chapter to a longer story. You need to work on a couple of things to make this chapter perfect though. The first are your verb tenses; you're getting present tense mixed up with past tense, and during Harry's speech at the end, it should be bled not bleed. Another thing I noticed, and that's only because I have so much trouble with accept, expect, and except myself, is how you used the word accept when Harry's addressing Hermione. It should be except.

I know I'm probably coming across as anal, but that's because I like what you have so far and would love to see you explore the ideas in it a bit further. I would really love to see how the wizarding world would cope when they realize they have no chance of getting Harry back. This chapter just needs a bit of polishing.

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I read this one on your Yahoo Group and I loved it. I am glad you are making the another. I can't hardly wait!