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for Inside Outside Hidden Away

by Alison

person bluedecor
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've reread this story many times. Very well done. Thank you
person lisa
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cute soo cute.Just like the others.
person Bambu
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I see you've got plans for this dire contingency ... and very good plans they are too. I will confess that I laughed like mad when I realized that Severus was married to Pansy Parkinson. UGH! Poor man.

You did a very nice job of the narrative tone in this story -- it's quite plausibly a six-year old girl!
person AFC
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hahah. that was cute. i liked seeing it from a 6-yo point of view. it would be funny though if the rabbit turned out to be an Animagus. i'd laugh even harder if that was true. loved it!!
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another EXCELLENT story! :)
person Marti
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi Alison!

I read this story first on Sycophant Hex and absolutely lo0ved it! I could see you continuing this story or doing another one shot based on this premise.

great story!

marti
person WickedWitch
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was interesting... I see this going all sorts of directions...although I was sure once you made jemima a rabbit that it would be an animagus and change at the very end. LOL oh well... perhaps a plot bunny? Pun intended.