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January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
just curious were did you get the idea for snape to have a daughter named lilith? The reason I am wondering is I used the name lilith in a hp rp and she was snapes daughter.
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January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I need chapter 10! Why not tell her the truth? If anyone could help it would be Hermione.
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January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
But that leaves Harry without anything! Why shouldn't he or rather she "inherit"?
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January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Need chapter 9!
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Intersting but, I shall Withhold judgement untill the story fully blooms. Until then keep up with interesting ideas and update.
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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aw only one chapter?!? its ok i like the development please update more
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
#7: So many questions, so few answers.
Multiple types of Weres are interesting, but other than possible mating issues the story does not provide any socio-economic / political background / status. In JKR's books Werewolves are persecuted, so what about other types of weres in your AU?
The chapters are short and the characters behavior is abrupt. The fic comes across more as a series of related vignettes than a story. Too much information is dumped and too much action takes place off the page instead of being brought out in the story as part of conversation or a discovery process. In other cases information is repeated.
JKR's Harry is an abused teenage with emotional issues. Even allowing for fan fic license, this fic does not handle the revelation well. Harry turns into a girl and her only concern is how the wizarding world is going to react? Harry turns into a girl and all of the sudden is totally accepting, if cool, towards Snape? Even with allowances for the peculiarities of were-raven heritage this is way past the bounds of credibility. What about Ron and Hermione? Do they exist is this AU?
You may have this fic clearly visualized but it isn't making the transition from your imagination to the written word.
Multiple types of Weres are interesting, but other than possible mating issues the story does not provide any socio-economic / political background / status. In JKR's books Werewolves are persecuted, so what about other types of weres in your AU?
The chapters are short and the characters behavior is abrupt. The fic comes across more as a series of related vignettes than a story. Too much information is dumped and too much action takes place off the page instead of being brought out in the story as part of conversation or a discovery process. In other cases information is repeated.
JKR's Harry is an abused teenage with emotional issues. Even allowing for fan fic license, this fic does not handle the revelation well. Harry turns into a girl and her only concern is how the wizarding world is going to react? Harry turns into a girl and all of the sudden is totally accepting, if cool, towards Snape? Even with allowances for the peculiarities of were-raven heritage this is way past the bounds of credibility. What about Ron and Hermione? Do they exist is this AU?
You may have this fic clearly visualized but it isn't making the transition from your imagination to the written word.
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I soooo need chapter 8! Draco was attracted to Harry?
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This...this is one of the weirdest stories I've ever read. Hmmmm...I'm not much into Female!Harry... Oh well, what do I know? Your writing is very well done, great job!
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!