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person GuiltyPleasure

schedule January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM

This story is hot and written pretty well. The one thing that drives me insane though is that you constantly confused the twins' names.

person LoveOfTheSerpent

schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Oooooooh, that was delicious! Yummy twincest is always a good time. Good job! ^.^

person Anon

schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

person Sybylle

schedule January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Very Good Story. Love the Fred-George-Hermione triangle.

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person hugh_pym

schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Really good. I like the progression of Hermione from unsure to willing participant and that Hermione had a realistic sexual history. I think this works as a one-shot but you should continue writing other stuff.

person kes

schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM

amazing

person Annie

schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM

i like it.

person Lucy

schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM

Very nice!
I've always envisioned Fred and George being very attentive lovers, and I think you showed this perfectly.
Honestly, I think my ONLY problem with it was that I thought that the way you made Fred and George keep calling each other "brother" sounded a little awkward.
Other than that, I think it was really great. I liked how unsure you made Hermione at first, it made it seem more realistic.
I think it does very well as a oneshot, and I can't exactly see it developing into a full story.
(though who knows... maybe you'll think of something?)
Anyway, good good good!

person Dylan

schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM

Very nice. Extremely erotic. Good job.

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