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Hrm. It's an interesting start, I do hope you intend to continue and quite quick. A spell? Over Hermione? Surely, the Headmaster in his own right would be able to convince the girl to do as he intends her to do without the aid of magic. He is after all the most respected and honored wizard...anyhow, so far, so good. Hope you continue soon.

its ok update soon.

Well now! This is your story and you may do what you want, but be warned, there will be those who won't like your image of Dumbledore, and will probably flame you for it. Personally, I am interested to see where you will go with this, so I would like to read more. There are a few spelling and grammar errors, for instance, in the first line you used the word "sweared", the past tense of "swear" is "swore", but all in all, not a bad start. Keep up the good work. Toodles.

I love the story so far! Although, i wouldn't mind the paragraphs being a little more spaced out. Easier to read. :) Anyway, I am anxiously awaiting more! :)

I think your Dumbledore is spot on. I hope you continue the story!

ch 1 : I love your Dumbledore ! I really don't mind at all a Headmaster going for glory.

this is by far the best start to a post HBP fic ever. The banter between the two wizards is wonderful. i hope this is a fic you will stick with. I will read Evey chapter.

You need a beta to correct your grammar.