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Ch. 2 - You sure don't seem to mind backing up Dumbledore's flaws by making them worse! He has just taken a barely 17-year-old girl that is in his care and protection and given her away, without her understanding of what was happening, as a sex object. Even on his worst days, Dumbledore would not do such a thing. This is called Child Human Trafficking!

I read a lot of fanfiction with NC-17 ratings, and most authors have relationships develop from the standpoint that both parties involved go into a relationship with knowledge and acceptance. Also, reading about rapes and torture that are announced and expected is one thing, but what really gets me is when an author takes a normally respectful character and uses them in an unannounced and unexpected way. When Hermione is lead to cast this spell without knowing fully what she is doing, Dumbledore is taking away her choice. He is showing no concern for her feelings, her intelligence, or her human rights. I think we all realize that Dumbledore is manipulative, but I cannot express to you how repugnant I find it that you have turned him into a pimp of the worst degree. Not only uncaring, but also laughing at the plight that he has created via human trafficking. Tossing Hermione off to be used without a single thought about what she might think or feel about it

Woot woot ty ty. an update. I loved it lol. ohh dear what has Hermione agreed to? Poor Hemry. lol lemons are good. very good. hehe I love Severus, hes soo snarky in this. and thamks fr teh email. I got it and was like yay. I understand things get in the way. goodluck hon. cant wait fr the next chappie

Oh what will she do nex? Run off and hide until she can not stay away any longer or go face him? And what will he do? I feel the build up for some serious lemons here....

Oooh, very interesting beginning. I love this Dumbledore - his inner thoughts made me laugh quite a bit. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please, please update again soon! :)

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

This story sounds like a great idea but you need to update soon! Please don't stop... this is a very interesting take of a S/H story... Please e-mail me when you update

Ohhh I like it. very good start. Please continue . I would love to see more. Oh my dear god Albus is soooo meddlesome. and soo Slytherin lol. Cant wait to see what he casts. and lol Severus could definite;y use a good shag lol. might loosen him up. More more more please. Please update soon.

ch 1: I have disliked Dumbledore since the first book. Now with your story I wont have to argue about it with other folks - everyone will know upfront that he's a devious slimeball (or whatever the appropriate British version would be).

Good beginning.

please continue please......