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Love to read more of this soon....

I personally agree with your version of Dumbledore, as he can't be that much of a saint... he has put people in danger. He forced Lupin to spy on the Werewolves, he encouraged Harry in his first year to go possibly to his death, and he has made Snape's life hell, AND he seems to have favourites of his own. Like not expelling that brat Black for almost successfully killing Snape... so, yes, Dumbledore isn't a saint. I have grown to sort of dislike him myself!

I like this so far, but at times you slipped into first person narrative with Hermione... and then went straight back into third person narrative... that confused me slightly, I'd check that through if I were you...

I cannot wait for the lemons though, and Snape will smile won't he?

OMFG! LOL please please please update soon your story is really good. and i'm really anxious to find out what hermoine got herself into

How mean of dumbledore! Acting like a slytherin! What will happen between hermione and snape now? Will he take adventage of this? I really would like to find out, so I hope you will update soon!!!

Mwhaha! Great chapter! (Thanks for the double spaces too.) :)

*is amused*

Write on, dear author.

ooh i like this story really intresting....haha oh dumbledore....

I certainly agree with about Dumbledore. He may seem like a kind grandfatherly old man, but he is also a chess master who is not above using and sacrificing his pawns in order to reach his objectives. Another good chapter, can't wait to see how the plot developes, and a friendly reminder that you need a beta. Look forward to the next update. Toodles.

Great Chapter! Cant wait for the next one of course! =P

this is a great story and i look forward to the next chapter and i hope that it is as long as this one was! :)