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for Monkey's Business

by sappysappysappy

schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is a good story so far i can't wait to see what happens to all ginny,lavender and all the girls who acted like bitchs. so what if hermoine hogged the bathroom all the girls acted like they where going to die because she did it.
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was great. I love SS/HG smut... I even have a name for this ship... Snapher. I think it works.

FANBLOODYTASTIC! Is there going to be more?

Although I can't see Ginny turning against Hermione just because she hogged the bathroom I thought that was a little petty of all the Gryffindor girls... that didn't sit quite true with me.

But the steam was steamy... wonderful.
person beeky63
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! That was HOT! Something wickedly delicious to keep me warm in these frigid temperatures. Will the spell wear off? Will there be a happy ending? I hope so. Keep up the good work. Toodles.
person mekareami
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far, but loathe the extended responses to reviewers. Please don't respond to me, but know I am eagerly awaiting the next update. Thankyou for writing
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow .. i cant belive they did that to her ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

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person Anon
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Apryl
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It never ceases to amaze me how a man will take the guilt of his own actions and project it back at a girl. Especially if he's the one to "deflower" her. Very nicely captured. I can remember it all too well.... *sigh* As to W.W.II, did you ever hear "do your boys hang low"?
person Apryl
schedule January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
To respond to your critic; 1 it's only a story. 2 if you want to look into it further you can see she obviously adores him. She might not realise how deep her feelings run, but the Headmaster is, shall we say "all-knowing". Sometimes love just needs a little nudge. Please continue this story Miss Sappy. Oh, by the way, What was the "saucy tune" Albus was whistling?
person amsev
schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
EXCELLENT witty beginning. I love your "questionable" Dumbledore!!! Look forward to reading more.