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for Possesion In True Form

by DawnsEarlyLight

person sinbad
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've missed you, and am so happy you updated. Great story please, please, please don't keep us waiting long for rhe next chapter.
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy to see another chapter to this story, it is always great when one of the stories you have marked among your favourites are updated.
A great chapter, but even though I can understand why Severus is angry for not beeing told about his children, I think you should balance the relationship a bit. A Hermione who doesn't manage to add to braincells together when Severus is manhandling her is a rather dull Hermione, you should give her some spine and caracter. She could hardly have been able to raise 3 small children without beeing able to stand up for her self. Getting week in the knees for Severus, yes, allowing her self to be abused no. The same goes for Severus, how on earth can he be a responsible parent when he is unable to control him self? If he wan't the childre to respect him, he should at least pretend to respect their mother.
person Anon
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter, update more soon!
person Anon
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please continue!! :)
person sinbad
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have really been enjoying this story and I hope you will be updating soon.
person Criosdan
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A jealous Severus is great. :)

Please, please more.
person junee88
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far. Please continue!!! :)
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So happy to see a new chapter, promise you won't make us wait so long for the next one.
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please please update soon im looking forward to mionie's answer..*evil smirk*
keep up the good work!