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person thing 1
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Naturally Severus found out Hermione went inside his head. Honestly, for someone smart, Hermione really fell into that one. Greyback finding himself a mate in a muggle was extremely unexpected. Can't wait to see what happens next!
person Ms_Figg
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes. At first I considered letting Hermione get away with it, but as I thought about it, I knew there had to be some indication on her part that she had done something wrong. Most honest people don't hide their crimes well. They start acting a little strange. Hermione tried to make up for her actions and guilt by being overly accomodating to Severus, which set off the bells in his head. If she had acted normally, most likely he wouldn't have become suspicious so fast...but then again, her complete turnaround might have eventually made him suspicious too. Why had she so suddenly decided to stay with him when she had just told him she wouldn't promise that? Sooner or later he would have looked in her mind to see what happened. She just sped up the process. Now that he knows...heh heh. I get to write some fun, dirty stuff. lol Severus = Father Confessor.
person reviewer
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why would Draco having an std prevent him from participating in raping muggles? Who would really care if he passed it on?
person Ms_Figg
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
reviewer: Draco having an incurable STD is an issue because the muggles are shared. Sure he could wait until everyone else was done, but it is understandable that he wouldn't because the women are overused almost dead by that time. So it works for him.
person Heksy
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well now. That was quite interesting. So Grayback raped Elizabeth...hmmm.
I hope she will be able to pay him back and then some. Although she is a death eater, I don't think she should be treated this way...then again, hahaha.
And as for hermione.
Severus is nothing if not brilliant.
He will find out what she has done.
Will he be able to trust her after finding out?
Oooohhh...the suspense
person pittwitch
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another captivating story from such a brilliant lady! Hermione, Hermione ... I somehow doubt she will be staying in the background for long ...
person takemeaway
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A man in love will do surprising things, even act out of character, so fear not, for those who know the depths of love do not think Severus is becoming too soft. Even Severus cannot deny love when it stares him in the face.
person Lizzy
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwww. Such a cute chappie. Some fluff now and then is good. Haha, it'll be interesting to see Albus and Severus' faces when they realize there are TWO kiddies. Hopefully Volaria will end up safe.
person Amy
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is so good so far. I really loved that chapter. I related to it alot, but I won out in the end. He came home to and married me 2 weeks ago. Keep up the good work. More chapters please!
person Barbara
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great update and I really hope that Hermione hangs in there and that poor Severus can be free to live his live and live it with Hermione..