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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's a good story--I think it'd be worth the effort to develop it more and turn it into a multi-parter. I don't mean add a sequel--the points in time you start and stop at are good.
schedule
December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh my dear. Great story but ack!!! you left it at that. Ahh well. Loved it anyways.