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for Love, Lies, and a Secret

by Leviosa

person angel
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohh man ... he should have told lilly what he was up to ... and what is going ti happen now with mione and harry .... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person dhfreak
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG you can't leave us like this lol.. wow ... You are making me hate ron lol... this is brilliant lol... love it
person LegalAlien
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great new chapter!
Please write more soon!
person Anon
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice
person angel
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man mione should call it off with ron ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more....... later for now

angel
person ecorate
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice keep it up POST SOON
person dhfreak
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story I am very intrige with it I love the plot in it so far and I can't wait to see what comes next...
person Dorian
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
He wants to marry her when they haven't even shagged?
I thought they lived in Britain, not Afghanistan.
person Dorian
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Honestly, why are they all such prudes?
They story's not bad, but u really have to remember that this is britain your writing about, not american, where I assume you're from.
person LegalAlien
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story!!!

I love your detailed descriptions on how the relationships Harry/Ginny and Ron/Hermione simply don't work out! Ron is really an unimaginable git who seems to only think about himself; and Ginny is overcome with jealousy and hero worship.

Please write more soon!