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for Where are you?

by eyesemerald

person Legyviel
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm intrigued... but extremely confused! please continure this and make it clear! love it so far!!!
person The w00t Girl
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's rather sad, which just makes it all the more beautiful; even thought you could leave it as the ending, it would be interesting to see where this would go. Either one will be great and again, you wrote a beautiful story.
person Chinu
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like you story, like the others. But It's kinda sad, like 'Tomorrow'. It reminded me so much of 'Tomorrow' and made me almost cry <.< But go on writing such great stuff. Very good work!