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for Sleepless Nights

by CyanaWhite

person Mariah A.
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was really good but I want to find out who wins the match. Will HERMIONE get to have her one absolutley wonderful NIGHT with SNAPE or will she never talk to SEVERUS again. I NEED TO KNOW!! (just a suggestion but I think that Hermione should and please make it good. :)
Thankyou ur gr-8 Mariah
person Annie
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, i missed alot in the past few days. cant wait for more.
person Lady Voldemort
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I KNEW IT!!!!!!! I KNEW IT!!!!! this is good please put up a new chapter soon!!
person pickyrev
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Terrific story! I like the idea of Snape sleep walking. Can't wait to see what else happens. I was a bit disappointed that he attached Griffindor two times. I thought you could have come up with something a bit different instead of a "repeat." Not sure if I buy Hermione being in love with him yet; deep lust yes, but love seems too quick as she really hasn't gottne the chance to know him personally except for what he can do for her in his dreaming state. I would ask that you go back to ch. 3 and consider changing the word exhume to exhude, although I guess, he could dig out or unbury sexual feelings. I know it's a holdiay for many,but please update soon.
person Clara
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfull story, I like really like it. I am curious what will further happen, what will Severus do? How will he react after Hermione
person Ejana
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think this is great, I lookforward to more.
person Jade
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ack! Evil cliffie. Need next chapter button!!! Make next chapter button appear please!
person Heksy
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now that was a bomb shell, if ever I saw one.
What a turn of events...keep it up.
This is turning out to be a delightful story.
Thanks for sharing
person Anon
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Again you done it again a great chapter and great cliff hanger.

Great Job!!!!
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very excellent chapter! :) I am eagerly awaiting the next, I hope it is out very very very soon.