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Okay, I had to leave a review on Chapter 4. Moody telling Harry the birds and the bees in his Moody-like fashion. Hysterical. I can't stop laughing!

good so far can't wait until you finish the story

I feel apauled at reading this story cuz i know u didnt write it u took someone elses work u should be ashamed

Boooooo boooo wtf im going to tell u how ot should have been donne the first chapter was fine just fine nice twist funny but ther whole harry hates the headmaster thing no nooooo not cool second after they were told they should have been in shock then married before the shock wore off then been herried off to a nice enclosed room after harry got a potion to make him harder them chinesse algebra anf the grils potions to make them "ready" and ovultating or some more receptive or somthing your being a little to creative a little to far out there. then u should have spent the next 2 chapters in detail describing EXACTILY what every last thing harry didi to those girls from how fast he took off their cloths to how long he got borred with regular positions and went for the kama sutra period.

hahaha that was awesome wish there was more

Great so far... keep it comming. I especially *loved* Mad-Eye giving Harry "the Talk"... *snort*

I think that mad eye's ''teachings'' was one of the funniests things I HAVE EVER ENCOUNTERED.

I like Moody's choice... Vivienne is cool. So is Elisha, Elaine, and Elizabeth... And may I commend you on Helga and Hannelore? I love those!

Good luck! Great job on this as well. I like the ridiculousness of Moody's conversations.

i feel sorry for ron going to be at school all by him self both his best friends gone

please update soon i like this it is funny