A great story line. I’ve often thought that Dumbledore’s ‘protection’ of Harry did as much harm as good, even if it kept him alive. The only love or friendship Harry ever knew was in the Wizarding world, not the muggle world. To isolate Harry there, away from his friends, bordered on cruel, and if Dumbledore had lost Harry to the dark forces in the Wizarding world, he’d have only himself to blame.
Alas, like so many stories on this website, it ends suddenly and without any real resolution of the problems Harry, Ginny, and The Order face. The editing of this story was generally good and consistent, but there are definitely some holes and errors that should have been caught and corrected. I suppose the best thing I can say is that when I reached the end, I wanted more.
Update please!
Keep going.:)