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for Harry's Harem 2

by selenepotter

person Leria
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is great thus far, but I really didn't like the part about "The Deva's cannot reveal themselves to wizarding kind!" If anything, the Deva's SHOULD reveal themselves to wizarding kind in order to allay their fears about the muggle-borns disappearing and use their powers to help the other people's of the world.

Harry/Harriet should KNOW THAT by now, that keeping in the darkness only makes you appear to be evil.
person MrGalion
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Nevile
person MrGalion
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay it'd all coming together now.
person MrGalion
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OKay i'm getting back into the story fully now.
I'm still confused with who was who.
I like how the Devas are all so evil like.(or assumed i should say)
person MrGalion
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting... Update soon
I absolutly lovingly adore your stories.
I only wish that you may write more of tehse wondderfulls stories.
You have transformed me in to a story grubbing whore.
person Leria
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Seems like someone should clue Harriet into the reality of what and who she is! The story is fine, but I don't like the overwhelming 'morality' of Mrs. Potter there. She doesn't want to become like her mother? What's wrong with that?!

Just seems like Harriet has been brainwashed by someone, and I don't mean her mother.
person MrGalion
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I Love your stories, I truly do.
I feel this story is turning more into a list.
I feel there is too much going on and you are just saying who is who.
I enjoy reading your stories and hope that you update soon.
person MrGalion
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG Your Back, I thought you left us.
I Really Really Really Enjoy your stories a whole lot.
THey were my first favorited I saved. Thanks for writting and not leaving us.
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey. Just Yesterday I finished reading Harry
person MrGalion
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see you Update more.