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person Heather Squires
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Write more of it, even if it's the one your mom started. Ask me for tips if you need.

Kodah.
person Tumshie
schedule January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice start, but a bit unbelievable that a 17 year old male wouldn't know what a 'wet dream' was, most males experience them from the onset of puberty (12 to 14 years old)
person TiffANY
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far

It has a lot of potential

So congratulations

Just don
person lisa
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lol Harry I bet he's soo happy he's busting!!! Lol Not so High and mighty now that Harry can use his magic. funny. good start.