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for After the war

by absinthe34

person Sophia
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter. I can see the reasoning of why so many characters had to be killed off; I can't wait to see what they plan to do next!
person Isis
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More!!!
I like it keep it up.
It's well written, the grammer and general thing is good *i get bored of reading stories that i have to reorder in my head cause they're written funny* and i just plain want to know more!
Might i suggest option 2? I'd quite like to see Fudge get eaten :D
Are you thinking of having a mailing list to keep people updated?
Again keep it up :D
person kay_lupin
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
why not do both have Harry and Severus Happy and let Fudge get Eatten lol
person Sophia
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter; I like how it's really starting to come together even more. I'm not particularly picky; if it goes dark that's fine and the same for if it goes light and semi-happy. Keep up the splendid work!
person Legyviel
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Happy happy rebuilding fic please! if not, just don't make snape into an utter bastard k? the eating fudge thing sounds kinda interesting though! good chappie!
*cheers and kisses*
person Crimson Vipera
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my! Harry knows parceltongue, the sicret language of postal workers! Sorry, couldnt resist =D It should be Parseltongue, of course. But the story isn't bad, really. I liked Harry realising he is talking to himself and the snake helping him with Snape's floo. I won't promise I will read on, 'couse You've simply killed to many characters, but I think You should write on. You obviously have some good workshop there, all You need to do is practice. Keep the good work up.
CV
person betty
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thanks for these updates. I enjoyed them. I am looking forward to future developments between Harry and Severus.
person AislinnNicole
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I adore Vamp!Snape, so you've definitely got my attention. I hope you plan on comtinuing this and updating soon!
person manda
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update i am loving the story so far
person Legyviel
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really really like this beginning! don't be so scared, you're off to a great start! PLEASE continue!!!!
*cheers and kisses*
~Legyviel