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for Born in Frustration

by dropedonmyhead

person Lady Lynn
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
who screamed!!!!!
person wizli
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!. Draco's inner monologue was brilliant but the best of all was of course the kiss, wow, things were getting really hot there in Harry's bed... ^^ but you left us a cliffie *scowls* . Who found them!?, I don't thing it was Petunia, maybe someone from the Order or one of Harry's friend...
person Anon
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!
ahahhahaha aunt patunia :DD

update soon please! i can't wait for more! that kiss was fantastic...
person Lady Lynn
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hialrious chapter. simply hilarious. particulatly the end.
person stef
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*bursts out laughing* oh man! awesome chapters! loved them both all the way! they made me laugh so hard!
And no, I don't feel like spanking you purely because the world is alright because these chapters are now up! ;)
Please update again soon or I might reconsider! :P
Stef
person Shelik
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I want to know what Draco is going to do to 'pull' Harry to him so plz update. Oh and I love the way you do the inner mind it is so funny ^_^
person The Dragon
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
82 reviews! For this dirty dirty filth! Shame upon you!

**laughs madly**

person drippy123
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Could you please remove, or at least reduce, the lines (~~~~) that you are using. Having to go back and forth with the slider is annoying, and makes the story very difficult to read on a smaller monitor. Only make your dividers a few inches and center them, that will break up the text nicely and keep the text in the viewing screen.
person Heksy
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay...way to go Draco.
I have one remark though.
It seems the sentences are too long for my screen and I have to keep moving the page from left to right and back.
This is really tiring.
I was wondering if you could break the long sentences in half and put them under each other.
person Anon
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yaaaay!