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for If Only He Had Listened...

by darkpyroangel06

person nercomi
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HI!!!!!!!!!!!!! wow that was a fast plot, um I like the mpreg and the H/D H/B conflict, but I'm not so sure about Harry marring just because he and Draco had a missunderstanding, it sounded really Ooc and not realistic. But anyway this is your fic and you write it the way you want to, I'm sure it will get even better and the # of chapters grow.
person fanfic mom
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful beginning.. I cannot wait for more.. please update soon!!!
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update! This story has potential, and I hope you work with it!

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person thrnbrooke
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I thought I had lost this story! Please bring on chapter 2!
person Jan
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great story. Love the start. Keep it up^_^. Please update soon.
person Anon
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a oneshot? What about Draco? What happensss!?!?!?!?!?!
person Hexane
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely. I love it... nice writing style, and the completely random cravings really make it.
<3
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person Madamdragon(not signed in)
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! i hope you update soon!