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for If Only He Had Listened...

by darkpyroangel06

person Katlin Malfoy
schedule December 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i loved the story it was great i died laughing at the moral of the story :) it was very cute
person tanya
schedule August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really liked this story, except one part of it. If draco had taht little of faith in harry and just walked out, then when he saw them again, act like a complete jerk, i dont think harry or blaise would be that forgiving. harry wouldnt have just jumped back into his arms like he hadnt walked out on them.
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i hope there more
person Jojo
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh, don't worry, I loved it! If I were that doctor whatever her name was, I would've burst out laughing when told the story! I liked the ending too, although it is kind of sudden. Maybe make a sequel or something?
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I didn't want this to end!!! But it was fantastic!
person Aisling
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked that. Silly Draco, honestly now, you'd think he'd learnt o keep his tantrums in check?!
person never_tempt
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi! You had a wonderful fic here. I'd started and stopped reading and then found it again. It was wonderful. You portrayed a hormonal pregnancy a little more than mine actually was, but I've heard tell of others that way. My craving was roast beef, not ham. Keep up the good work.
person Anon
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's okay lol I just paniced for a moment. I adored the story...great job.
person Ashley
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update this story. its so good. I love it!!!!! i cant wait to see what happens to harry and draco and blazie and the baby.
person Keba-kun
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
T_T -cries hysterically- It's so...so..so sad! It was all grr-ish,and Draco left him, and Harry went all sad. -sniffle- I love it! Then when his hormones started, and his cravings, and mood swings...XXDD It was hilarious. I really like . Cant wait til you update. ~Ja ne~