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by Pheobi

person champaygne
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ur story's brilliant.. will there be twists or voldermort or how will it end i wonder.. do continue to post pretty please 8D
person ZooArmy
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, took you quite a while, huh?
But it was worth to wait so long. Perfect!
person Leentjef
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NEW READER
VERY VERY GOOD STORY I REALLY LIKE IT
KEEP GOING AND POST SOON
BYE BYE
person stasa
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. Love to see Vila Draco get jealous :D
Can
person misslala
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far, can't wait for more.
person Blackcat16
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!
This is great. This is a little different then alot of other veela stories. It seems they are drawn out too long. But this one is going at a good pace. I also really like the characters' personality. It's not too OOC. Great job! Keep up the good work!:)
person NightLo
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...Harry has chosen - and this is good, especially the part of feeling, I like the idea of two become one very much.

So...what will happen next?
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
They bonded!!! Yippie!!! Sooo need chapter 7!
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the new chapter!!! Please update again soon.
person SnarkyB
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What's with the bad poetry at the end each chapter? :) Other then that, I like your story so far. Keep writing.