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by Pheobi

schedule June 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have this sneaking feeling that someone is going to die and it worries me. I really enjoy this story and although I do prefer Dom!Harry you do it well. Keep with it!
person Larimar
schedule June 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you really have your work cut out for you, trying to follow the songs in order! You are doing an incredible job! I love the little glimpses in each scene, and as hard as it is to maintain, the flow is still very good! Keep up the story, it's awsome!
schedule June 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome as always!! i'm glad you're back and can't wait for more :D keep it up! your work flows really quite well even when you think it's choppy and it's fairly believable for the world they're in So Thanks!!!!
person thyladyx
schedule June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
it was a very akward song to tie into the story. But I think you managed to pull it off nicely. you know all through chapter 4 I kept being reminded of this video on youtube. if you put Bill Kaulitz und ehm yea in the search box its the first thing that comes up. its kinda funny you might consider checking it out. This is really great so far. cant wait for more. it does sadden me that this has been in the making for 3 years and isnt completed. *tears trickling* please update soon *pouts*
person Jennifer
schedule June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I know this story is more about Draco and Harry being mates before getting rid of Voldemort, but there is one question I have. How are Draco's parents taking the situation? Lucius is a Death Eater, after all.

Keep up the great work.....
person sweetteetwo
schedule June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was glad to see a new chapter.
but sad to see that you had to tell
some people off hope I was not one of
them because I love how real your charcter's
are. so please up date when you can.please
email me when you up date.
person sweettee
schedule January 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please up date soon because I liked the first
7chapter's that I have read so far.I would like
to see what happens next.when you up date please
email me thank you.
person sweettee
schedule January 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am the same sweettee who asked that
when you up date to please email me at
sweetteetwo@yahoo.com thank you
schedule March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Had to reread this!
person Lumcer
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I quite enjoyed it. I belive i am going to have to look up those songs now. by the way the whole entire touch thing engenious really.

KCK-Lumcer