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by Pheobi

person jujukitty
schedule September 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
really neat concept (not to mention great execution of said concept) of matching the story to the songs, great job, can't wait for the next chapter. and hopefully you'll stop getting people complaining about stuff you've already adressed :)
person lafbnz
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great story - love the drop kick of gw ---- h/d moving right along --- need to get rid of LV - then babies.....

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schedule July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good story.
schedule July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Didn't expect the sudden jump in time in the last chap. It was nice to get some action in this one though!
schedule July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
loved the love scene! Really good details.
schedule July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i like it its skippy through time which i'm not sue to but i like it can't wait for more.


~eros
person ZukoRocks30
schedule June 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've enjoyed your writing! While I have read several Veela-mate stories before, yours seems to have a fresh taste on the emotions involved. Thanks for a story that keeps holding my interest! Keep up the good work! :-)
person misaki
schedule June 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow this story is awesome! please let me know when u update! katrinadax@yahoo.com
person NightLo
schedule June 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just wondering now they are finally a couple, how would the general public or even the ministry react? And how will the two response?
person Booklady
schedule June 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a nifty story! I somehow keep waiting for Ginny to swing around and bite them in the ass, though. I'm really enjoying your story and I'm impressed with the way you make it fit the song lyrics.