rate_review Reviews

this story is shaping up to be a well thought out one, however, be careful not to put too many ideas from similar fics into this one, in particular the "sugar" cravings and the "voice" are both extremely similar to "Veela Engima" by Jennavere. Use different characteristics for your Veela and make him your own.

nice chapter. interesting developments.

a little aside though, reviews tend to slow down as a story progresses for most authors so requiring a certain number of them for new chapters might not work. just a note.

Yay! (Reviewing for chapter 1) This is pretty sweet! Love Veela!Draco when it's written like this. Dom!Draco, Sub!Harry, right?!?!

Slashy Snitch

not liking the demanding reviews thing, good story though! I love draco veela fics!!!

ooh.... i love it still! can't wait to read more... this really is turning out to be wonderful!

You know Draco kinda does rimind me of a cat here... if i come home from one of my friends houses and that friend has a cat she has to ignore me for a bit then she has to rub all over me to get her scent back on me... and god forbid i'm away longer than a day or two lol...

And it's good to see that Harry acctually cares a bit... and is noticing his looks and stuff... that bodes very well... doesn't mean i can't feel a bit bad for ginny (unless she goes psycho and tries to kill him)... though i do think he's better off with Draco in most cases :)

So sorry, I didn't think that I had offended you so much. Your logic does have reason though. On with the review, good chapter, I enjoy the plot nad the lyrics, keep up the good work!

great chapter please continue with the story

So far so good. But the song lyrics at the end of the story aren't really necessary. I understand that they're there to show emotional intent, but couldn't you just put a couplet or two in? I'd much rather read your prose instead of someone else's.

Fast updater, aren't you? This is great! I like Dom!Draco...sorry if I upset you about asking, though. I didn't mean to make you upset. I can't wait for the next chapter...

Slashy Snitch

It's interesting, I'm curious as to where you're going to go with it.