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for Coming Home

by Pheobi

person Justmine25
schedule June 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Your story is perfect I am amazed at the story premise and I adore how you charaterize the people in it your veela story is exacty the type I love to read and I am sad to see that youve not completed it if it is completed elsewhere please give me a link as I would love to read its completion
person Kayla
schedule May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow I'm only to ch. 2 and I already love this story. I actually started crying when Draco knelled in front of Harry and said that..it was so sweet even though he was still confused his self..and then when Harry got upset the pain he felt..awww it was all such beautiful writing. I read through another story of yours but it only had like 5 chapters and incomplete but it was amazing..as I know this one will be. Cannot wait to read more of this and find out what happens :)
person Syncopal
schedule November 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is such a lovely read <3 I love the way you tie in the songs and the development of the story.
<3
person PeriLover
schedule October 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another fantastic chapter! You are following the songs quite well! Please keep it up. My email is bluj2420@att.net. Thanks again for an amazing story!
person Seliki
schedule May 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok Gotcha songs and lyrics and stuff...now about the story this is wonderful and I love the way you write in Harry and Drake (snicker). Keep them coming honey.
person Louise
schedule May 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I'm really enjoying Coming Home. I look forward to more chapters. Thank you for posting.
schedule December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is only the second story of yours that I've read, but I've decided you're a brilliant author.
Please add me to your mailing list (I think I read something like that in one of your ANs.)
Annabeth
annabeth_gray@gmx.at
schedule December 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
firestarter13_13@yahoo.com

So... I'm back. That impatient Slyterin girl from your other story? Yeah. I thought I'd leave my email again, just incase for some odd reason it was lost in transition... Impatience and whatnot. I'm a Slytherin. It comes with the territory.

I'd really like to see more. Soon. That'd be great... Ya know, just if you have time, and if you really want to post more... I'll come back and read it...

There may be a curse involved if you decided suddenly that you never want to write again, and will never finish any of your stories, but we'll just leave that as a worst case senario, shall we? Yes? Good.

Until next time,
A now loyal Slyterin reader
Alena
schedule November 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant concept and you have interpreted the songs so well into a story. Love it!!!
schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hura like it
now to pass oout to sleep

~Eros