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for Midnight visitor

by Ravensblood

person dark rose
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sorry to hear that and i hope that you get better!!take care!!!
person rnh
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the story. I want to see what exactly is going to happen between Harry, Hermione and Voldermort and how Ron and Ginny will react.
person Rayder04
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really good chapter,

I can see that Harry is making is mind about what he wants, that childhood love is not the same as grown up love and what he feel for Ginny was a necesity of a normal life, with Hermione it will always be an adventure or out of ordinary.

I like that Hermione explain just a little about what she wants and Harry knows how to satisface her, I am sure he will have the initiave and the ideas soon, besides know Hermione can play her love scenarios as she want them.

Can't wait for next chapter (some little foreplay in th shower?) and to know what will old Voldi try to do know that his plan is backfiring on him(with Harry feeling happy and Hermione confronting her feelings for Harry).

JO
person xenija
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh! You've finally updated! Yay, I'm so happy to see your next chapter. harry sems to rethink his life and what he want's from it...Ginny is no longer a priority , but Hermione is...it was kind of cute when she said to him where she wanted to be touched...And I just can not wait to see what Voldie ol' man is going to say about this..
Keep up the great work!
P.S. Happy Birthday!:-)
person angel
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what was great .. and your right i think voldy would have something to say about it .. please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person Christopher
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story, and I can believe he would say "Morals be Damned!" cause I would in that situation!
person Ms.Moonie
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please up date soon! i wanna find out what voldemort has in store for mione' and harry for that matter!so keep up the good work!!
person Expelliarmus
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh My Dear God!!!!

This story is magnifacent, absoloutly gold. I've loved every second of it. H/Hr is my favourite ship, and LV/Hr is right up there too, and you've combined the two perfectly.

Hope you update soon.
person lisa
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chappie. Poor Harry and Hermione this is the actual torture. Voldermort's plan to tear them all apart. adn it would. I hope they decider to keep it secret for now. But honesty is best. Ron will wanna pummel Harry. and Ginny will be devastated. SO goodluck with the next chappie and all. indeed you have a lot ahead of you.
person Rayder04
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, glad that Harry and Hermiione did it at last.

Its sad that they dicover their developed love like that, but relationships change. Will not be a kick if "the power doens't know" comes from their new relationship? that will be ironic.

Who say Harry have to drop Ginny?
About Ron, well he is more shallow and can be easy distracted by other girl, I never belive or like the Hr/R really not chemistry in that, it was more like a easy form to get a date with out get hurt for both.

Of course Voldemort will make a comeback, that is the kick and maybe that will help Harry to fight him and destroy him.

Keep the good work

JO