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Remember--commas are your friend. I know they may pretend to hate you, but, really, they're just shy. Also, I really like the plot. I thought it was interesting, and cannot wait to here more, so yay.

So, summary: good plot, more commas.

tell u what i think hu?... I think.... ((I can think??... Nevermind...)) U need to update. This story is only 3 chapters long and its alreadygot me asking questions. I like Ginny and all but she needs to go so snape can come in.... And icant waitto see what Snape will act like when he gos off his potion! SO PLEASE update soon!

A very interesting start and I can't wait to read more to see what'll happen next. Especially with how this will develop into a Snarry fic. Keep up the grand work!

so as much as i would like to read more of your wip fics i have to admit this looks great. i don't know what the hell severus is but i bet its going to be interesting come the school year. and harry's answer to ginny was awesome. i couldn't help laughing. oh thats why molly... sure i'll be your boyfriend. it reminded me of being a young child playing at grown up relationships. and are they planning for ginny and harry to marry or just procreate? those were the options in severus's letter, right?
and from your chapter 1 authors note - what is DAAS? and good luck with your muse.
-crissy

I definitely like it but i need more. so update soon. please

The start of this story is very promising! (but then I think every story from you is amazing ^^)
So... please update soon!

oooh yay! looking forward to more (:

hey. i'm so glad to see you're writing another fic. i love your writing style and have read just about all your other work. it's all excellent and well written. i think it's wonderful how you can use the same pairing and yet make every story original. this one already sounds like it's going to be a page turner. all i ask is that you keep the updates coming because i'm already quite interested in where this is going.

I love your fics! This is a very interesting start. Everyone trying to match Harry with Ginny before telling him what is actually going on is so typical of the Order. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Excellent story! I can't wait to see Snape's reaction to Harry next time they are in the same vicinity.