rate_review Reviews

Love fics like this, very well written characters and compelling plot.

hey dont worry i like your story. its a good thing that you havnt put any smut in yet because then it would just be pointless. please keep it up. If you want to shut the winers up you could put in smut from the other couples.

just wanted to mention again that i love this fic. it's heavy with plot and slowly building up to the Snarry aspect to the story. i love it. cheers!

I love this fic, I do, but seriously what idiot is out there claiming there is TOO much smut? What smut??? I haven't seen any so far so it would be great for the smut to START (as long as it isn't Het, I mean, really). I have one request though- please, do NOT set up Draco and Hermione (or Ginny- a blond and red head- ICK). I mean, aside from the straight up fact she's a bitch and he's a hottie that is ALMOST as cliche as Draco and Harry. Almost. However, you've probably already set up the whole story arc so I can't fault you but might I say gross, gross, and uber-gross. Ok, I'm done, again love the story, and you know, just putting it out there, it isn't too late for a nice Draco-Ron. Think about it. I know I will...yumm.

NOT ENOUGH SNARRY! lol justtttttt kidding. i liked the whole bit with them.. and i wish there was more, but i shall wait until the day it happens. My body will sit in this chair staring with longing, begging you to post a new chapter with some of what I need. Until then...... type with your hearts content, fill these pages to the brim with smut, love, and such. Oh dear God. I appologize... it's rather late:).
Cheers,
Hyde

i think this is the best Snape-vamp fic I've ever read. There's just no pleasing some people ya know? Just ignore them. It has the perfect amount of smut and plot. I'm just happy that you update regularly unlike some people here >.>

Ignore the smut-suckers RiffRaff! I love this story I jump up and down and squeee every times there is an update. My partner writes Envangelion fics and he gets the same comments in his reviews. I tell him to write what HE wants; what gives HIM satisfaction - not what his fans want. To those that have whined at RiffRaff and complained that the fic is not measuring up I say "Stiff!" It takes a LOT of courage and commitment to write fics - and extra courage to post them. Writers want contructive criticism and legitimate comments on their work, not complaints about what the fic does or doesn't have enough of! Keep up the great work RiffRaff - no you can't please everyone, but you do please thousands who read and enjoy your work.

A very good story! The last chapters were great! I for one like storys with plot, so for me you do not have to change anything! I

this was very very very good keep going and post soon
bye bye

If it helps, at this moment, I like the pacing of this story. Unless you start off with an established back story, you need to ease these 2 into a relationship, well if you plan to do it somewhat mildly realistically.