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ch.20-21

love it, love it, love it!!!!!

in fact... it's finger licking good!

yum yum yum!!!!

post soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Snape's got a donor. Poor Harry...not! I'm so hooked to this story.

I'm sure the Ministry isn't going to let up on finding Harry a spouse. That should certainly make for an interesting tug of war between Snape and them. My money is on the Vampire! Hey but once Snape starts sucking Harry's blood won't Lupin smell it. Can't you send him off somewhere? Send Dumbledork with him while you're at it!

Of course we can't forget Lucius. When he finds out what Draco's done he's gonna have kittens!

Thank you for posting ... and I know you have life besides the fan fic you write but could you write a little faster...and a little bit more.

Sorry I know I'm pushy...but the suspense is killing me!

Very good!!! I wonder how harry will react once he finds out that snape told him only a halftruth. Is snape not nervous about harry reasons to accept his proposition? He does it only out of fear to end up as snape

oooh hot! (literally)

Yay! you updated i'm soooooooooooooooooooo happy, the chapter was awsome as usual, and can i saw this ..... I LOVE YOUR FANFICS! i know i'm wierd but i really do injoy your fanfic's. so keep up the good work and i really cant wait for an update. ^_^

good chapter. I'm glad Ron has a new 'friend'. Hermione deserved that!

This is getting more and more interesting!! Love the Snape/Harry interaction and chemistry (or magic *lol*). Hermione, Draco etc. are fun too.

Loved it! And would love more ;)

Excellent chapters. Can't wait to read how Snape lures Harry into all of this. I also love the title to chapter 20. Yeah for an excellent New Year Eve night.

Can't raise my hand to either of those questions, but still loved the update. :D

Your story's nice.

However, my classic (Latin&Greek) background makes it impossible for me not to ask you one small question...

You do realise that 'Octavia' is a girl's name, don't you?
The male form of that name would be 'Octavius'...

Apart from that I'd have my story beta'd for orthographic and grammar mistakes if I were you; they're not too big, but somewhat annoying while reading.

But these are really the only remarks I have on the story.
The writing-style in itself and the story's plot are quite good, and I really enjoy it.

Do keep up the good work!