rate_review Reviews

First.

It's really petty to review just to nit pick! If you want to do it go get a monkey to groom!

This is an awesome story and all some of you have to say is that it's Octavius and not Octavia! Who cares! This is a mother fucking vampire and if Riffraff whom I now consider as part of my family wants to name him Octavia well so be it! You can name your vampire whatever you want if you ever write a mother fucking story, leave this one alone! If it bothers your sensibilties that much then don't read anymore!

Second.
The grammar mistakes are minimal so quit your whining! In case you haven't noticed Riffraff can do no wrong!


Third.

Snape is going to be so pissed when he sees the brusies Lupin left on Harry! "The Blood Sucker" and "Moon Howler" are gonna get it on! You go with your bad self Snape! STAPLE LUPIN'S EARS BACK!

I must admit I was a little confused as to why you let Harry know about his Mom but the more I thought about it the more I realized that Snape also needs to be taken down a notch, and Harry finding out about it will make him less receptive to his advances. You stand up for yourself Harry! Give him hell! Snape needs to appreciate you! Like Snape said, "the chase is on." Well get your running shoes on bud cause that boy's got legs and a damned fast broom incase he gets tired!

Can't wait fot Octavia to get involved and he will I mean it's not like he's going to leave Snape face Lupin, Dumbledore and the Minstry by himself!

Lastly,

I love you like a brother or sister or a third cousin! That should make it more interesting!
Look forward to your next posting!

I love how you update with a few chapter, so I must review. This is going along so smoothly. I'm very much amused.

wow i think sev should tell harry soon and then sev should have a word with remus ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel

Of course these two chapters are enough to keep us coming back ^^ your whole fic is :p

Anyway, congrats; I haven't read that thrilling a Snarry for quite some time... Go on ^^

(When will we have two more chaps to satisfy ourselves with? :D )

You have got to update soon man don't leave it like that.

Interesting... Though I think it would add a nice twist to it (especially snape and his maker, along with everyone else) if it turns out that Harry is part incubus or something, and has always known. Therefore having to kmow a lot about Vampires and is sort of testing Snape on how far/honest he is willing to go/be. Hope you have time to update soon.

looooooooooooooooooooooooooove the story when is the next chapter

your plot is enough to keep my coming back, and the way you have with words. I can't wait for another update!

I'm baaaaaaaaaaack!!!Love the story oh so much and love the way the plots going waiting eagerly for you to up-date

Well I didnt expect them to find out about Harry that soon but oh well it's your story,I wonder what will happen now in other words please update soon