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by DarkJuliet

person Anon
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Too rushed at the end of the last chapter, but otherwise very entertaining. Lovely little dares, though I think it should have been Ron mooning McGonagall and Harry kissing Hooch, that's just me though and my passionate love for Hooch. *swoon* Nice job with what you've given us. :) Kudos.
person Megan Consoer
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person pickles87
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story. very funny. would like to see an epilogue or a possible sequel.
person a_reader
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amusing. There are certain things, such as "chocolate eyes," which just feel unnecessary to me in what is otherwise an entertaining entry in the detention-genre. Thank you :)
person Bella Snape
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is that it? No more smut? Ah well, it was nice what we did get. Draco is truly a naughty little matchmaker isn't he!!

Liked it btw.
person lisa
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woot Woot!!!! better but still the lemons are short. I love the lemony goodness. too bad we couldnt see them finish and see whether they would continue or just be a one time deal. Still great though.
person Faith
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Such an awesome story. Wouldn't mind if you continued it a little. Hint, hint, hint. Great ending. Dares are always fun.
person CATEYE
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT,HERMIONE SURE WAS'NT EXPECTING SEVERUS TO DO THAT WHEN SHE WENT TO DETENTION.THAT LAST CHAPTER IS WHAT REALLY GOOD DREAMS ARE MADE OF!CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!