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for The Problem of Pain

by moirasfate

person xenija
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! Abso-bloody-lutely brilliant! I love your story:-)
person dick
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a piece of shit. This is completely OOC!
person Jessie
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm a hardcore D/Hr fan, but I really enjoyed this. Loved the breakup especially b/c I don't think they suit at all. Anyway, very good job, but I'm still waiting with bated breath for the next part of OTSP. Hint.hint...
person lisa
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was just perfect. an awesome cahppie. and lovely hot steamy lemons. Yay Percy!!! There's not really any stories going in depth with Percy and making him so delicious lol. Kudos. love it. hope there's more.
person dick
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That is one hell of an unrealistic story. What a piece of dragon dung. Congratulations.
person Inspire
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was excellent. I love your Percy. Thanks for sharing your writing with us.
person Inspire
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great opening chapter. I love your characterizations and the slow build. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
person GryffJr
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pairing is very unusual, but I liked it. This chapter is very well written and makes me crawing for more. So please, update as soon as you can. :-)
person lisa
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it and hope there's more to come. Percy's an enigma, HAve to wonder where he got his Slytherin tendencies and if he's Arthur's lol. Good job.