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for Careless Wishes

by Ducky

person Jade
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please write fast! Loved the chapter!
person Sampdoria
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved the first 3 chapters, I hope you will give us more soon!!!
person Annie
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dun dun dun.
person akmcinto
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wonderful! i love that snape was completely clothed! i hope you contiue with this soon. i can't wait to find out what the spell has in store for the two.
person CATEYE
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE SEVERUS AND HERMIONE IN THE BATH TUB AND CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE.
person Anguloce
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i wants more!!
person firewall
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 3 LOL Hmmmm, I wonder whose wish it was that the door wouldn't open? LOL this is fun. It's light and frivolous and I'm enjoying it thoroughly.
person amsev
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent, teasing beginning. I look forward to reading more!
person B
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
my roomates just shake their heads when I laugh out loud at the computer, i love it keep going!
person lisa
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hehehe. That was fun. Nothing like a lil desire enhancer huh?. Pooe Hermione, wanted but oblivious. and Pooe Severus, the star of her erotic Fantasies and he has no clue lol. Good job.